Opening Scene

The opening scene required a surprising amount of work considering how minimalistic the editing is. I had my crew round an hour ago along with some of my classmates from school who all fit into my target demographic bracket. Tim/Tom, Jack, Harry, Mike, Ollie, Ben, Dave, Luke, Mitch, Tabs, Lawrence, Shent and Tom were involved in this audience feedback (some of these people were identified previously: http://jamieprouta2media.blogspot.co.uk/2012/10/audience-profiling.html) although Dave and Ben do not live nearby so they talked to use over a Skype call.
After spontaneous changes including using fewer shots, lowering the general exposure and increases the volume of certain sounds, I ended up with the opening scene...